Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
While some argue that newspapers are optimal method of getting news, others
believe that other online news sources are more effective way to receive news.
This essay will elaborate on two perspectives and the reasons why I favor the
latter.
On the one hand, newspaper remain a crucial source of news for several reasons.
Chief of these is that the older generation still prefers to read news through
newspaper as their long-lasting habits was constituted when platforms providing
news online had not been advented. More specifically, they have traditionally
bought a newspaper over the years and simply do not want to change or do not
know how to access news online. Another justification why newspapers are
favored is that this provides the beneficial information. For example, the U.S
national newspaper supplies various topics such as domestic, international socio-
economic situation, and prices of commodities that are practical for workers.
On the other hand, although newspaper may still exist prolongly, other media like
the Internet is likely to become the more dominant source of news over time. This
is because people with portable electronic devices, such as a smart phone, can
access a huge storage of news just by a few clicks in the contemporary life.
Therefore, getting information through the Internet is much more easier than
newspaper, leading to a satisfying experience for readers. Furthermore, thanks to
internet-based platforms, news about an incident happening half the world could
be retrieved within a few seconds after its commencement, which renders news
updates one day later on conventional newspaper out of date.
In conclusion, despite the fact that printed newspapers still play a vital role, I
support the trend that they will be eclipsed by online news. From my perspective,
given the benefits the Internet brings for readers, there will be an decreasing
number of newspapers published in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...eficial information. For example, the U.S national newspaper supplies various to...
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Line 18, column 61, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...nformation through the Internet is much more easier than newspaper, leading to a satisfyin...
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Line 25, column 67, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ernet brings for readers, there will be an decreasing number of newspapers publis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44012944984 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88958890309 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9084618074 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.307692308 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263439501585 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901867584775 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833116851237 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675581229728 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678052243853 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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