Advantages and disadvantages of tighter gun control.
There is a wide diversity of opinions on the question of the government administrating stricter rules on gun control. Although this restriction has some drawbacks, I would argue that its benefits are more significant.
To commence with, admittedly, there is no denying that tighter gun control can upset law-abiding gun owners. Especially in countries like America, where guns are allowed to be used widely, some think that people should own a firearm as a form of self-defence. However, there are more ways to protect people when they are on the road apart from using a firearm such as a spicy spray or a small knife. Actually, many gun owners believe that were the public to be well-armed, there would be a high possibility that terrorists and other threats could capitalize on the defenseless population. Moreover, tighter gun control doesn’t guarantee citizens’ safety. Unless the use of firearms becomes outlawed, there will always be people who attempt to use or trade them illegally, which can be a real menace to everyone.
However, while its downsides persist, I believe that tighter gun restriction is a need in today’s world. First, limiting the access of deadly weapons like guns would help to safeguard the well-being of the public. It is apparent that tighter gun control creates a safer school environment, especially when school gun fights have never ceased to be a problem in gun-allowing nations like America. In 2019, a group of American high school students from California had confessed on social platforms that they were afraid of going to school everyday because gun slaughterers can be anyone they met. Taking advantage of that trend, thousands of students also raised their voice about the bleak reality of teenage gun usage in America and demanded local authorities setting tighter gun control in the future. Another advantage of tighter gun control is that it can reduce the rate of domestic violence victims dying in firearm-related incidents. Furthermore, in the long run, implying stricter rules for adult gun owners may be a good way to set an example for younger generations. According to some recent studies, most children whose parents own a gun are inclined to use it as a weapon. Obviously, the availability of guns in a family possibly has a great impact on the young’s mindset. Therefore, tighter gun control could educate the youth to love peace and help the countries get rid of prospective mass shootings.
All things considered, it is unreasonable for the government to outright ban guns, but I am convinced that stricter regulations regarding gun use should be imposed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2203.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1351981352 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8869480338 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6991965161 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.947368421 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5789473684 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37396364384 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132543949312 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114963403271 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192364964727 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132597604878 0.056905535591 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.