Do you agree or disagree with the statements Children should not be allowed to play the video games

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... of the pros and cons of things they do.I am totally agree with the statement tha...
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...and cons of things they do.I am totally agree with the statement that playing compute...
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... them with below three reasons. Firstly ,playing computer games has many disadvan...
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...s. Firstly ,playing computer games has many disadvantage including leading factors of no body ac...
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...sadvantage including leading factors of no body activity/movement.Playing games include...
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...ng factors of no body activity/movement.Playing games include no body movement: it can ...
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...activity/movement.Playing games include no body movement: it can be played by just sitt...
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...ng on the chair and laying down the bed.This actually causes laziness in the body an...
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...vates kids to play outside which include more fun activities.For instance , if a ...
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...side which include more fun activities.For instance , if a kid is just playing vid...
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...nclude more fun activities.For instance , if a kid is just playing video whole 2-...
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...and a kid which plays football on ground ,who have good health: definitely the foo...
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...ood health: definitely the football kid.Computer games doesnt lead to any benefit for he...
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...initely the football kid.Computer games doesnt lead to any benefit for health.Accordin...
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...s doesnt lead to any benefit for health.According to the survey taken by WASA on world wi...
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...ccording to the survey taken by WASA on world wide from last 5 years , it is shown that ob...
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...ccording to the survey taken by WASA on world wide from last 5 years , it is shown that ob...
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... by WASA on world wide from last 5 years , it is shown that obesity if 47% increas...
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...obesity if 47% increased in kids due to no body activities in their daily routines as c...
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...e attracted to mobile or computer games.Therefore , playing computer game doesnt have any...
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...ed to mobile or computer games.Therefore , playing computer game doesnt have any h...
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...games.Therefore , playing computer game doesnt have any health benefit for kids. Seco...
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... games is severe impact on eyes of kids.Due to pandemic from last two years , stude...
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...kids.Due to pandemic from last two years , students attending classes through mobi...
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...udents attending classes through mobiles,tablets and computer: they are already spending...
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...ing the computer games can damage their eye sight.It is studied that now days 6 out of 10...
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...mputer games can damage their eye sight.It is studied that now days 6 out of 10 ki...
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...d have glasses from the age of 5-6 years , this is because of excessive usage of g...
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... leaded by attractive video games on it.Therefore , if children should not be allowed to ...
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...y attractive video games on it.Therefore , if children should not be allowed to pl...
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...ld not be allowed to play them. At last , playing computer games on daily routine...
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...routines could be addictive to children.Playing new games daily , let the kids to make ...
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...tive to children.Playing new games daily , let the kids to make them addiction for...
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... the kids to make them addiction for it.For example, i have a niece of 5 years who ...
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...at she eats food while playing game only , she plays game while eating which cause...
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...causes her losses concentration for food ,also she eats food for like longer time ...
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...o that she can play meanwhile. Therefore , addiction make hings bad in kids life ,...
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... , addiction make hings bad in kids life , video games should not be allowed. In ...
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...ny will argue that few hours of playing doesnt harm anything , but as we know these ar...
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...ew hours of playing doesnt harm anything , but as we know these are kids and they ...
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... much aware of long tern damage from it.So playing computer games is a waste of ti...
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...games is a waste of time and should not allowed to play.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73842592593 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73746692109 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497685185185 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.1344086022 358% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 252.925548993 48.9658058833 517% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 341.166666667 100.406767564 340% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.0 20.6045352989 349% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.3333333333 5.45110844103 446% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.5376344086 758% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334835933611 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203718840702 0.076458572812 266% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793639105637 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213518530155 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860876416356 0.0645574589148 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.9 11.7677419355 314% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.32 58.1214874552 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 10.1575268817 286% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.4 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.0537634409 306% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.