How should we ensure that the television is a positive influence in the life of children?
Generally speaking, television had had a great impact on our daily lives since its advent. It is undeniable the benefits of it in entertainment or education, however, various programs increasingly appear leading to the downgrade of the quality. Therefore, it is imperative for parents and governments to consider how to curb the negative effect of television on children lives. In this essay, I will suggest certain solutions to combat this problem.
First and foremost, it would be better for kids to be supervised while enjoying the TV shows. Some families are already adopting this measure. Of course, it is not easy for adults to watch their kids all the time but if parents take turns and sometimes ask for help from neighbours it would be possible. If children are supervised, this would immediately prevent the possibility of children being exposed to harmful programs since the supervisor could decide whether the shows are appropriate for kids or not. Of course, this method is only available in certain cases where people live in a friendly neighbourhood.
In addition, provided that all of the programs are safe for children, limiting the screen time would prevent kids become too attracted to television. If young children are exposed to TV for a long period, it would cause both negative physically and mentally effects. For example, sitting too close to televisions for many long hours could lead to visual impairment such as nearsightedness, while watching too much could make children addicted. A drawback of this solution is that it might not be effective if parents are away to work.
Finally, governments should ban inappropriate programs for children at specific hours. Unless all of the TV shows are means for kids, there is a high chance that children are exposed to violence or sexual programs. Although it is not possible to ban all of the adult programs, it is better to reduce the number of them at a time frame when most children watch TV.
In conclusion, parents should look after their child whenever TVs are on and governments should have certain regulations in order to protect children from negative influence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08757062147 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83160352984 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2527864216 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.941176471 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130694787769 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448389127031 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484689731722 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858210291917 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306847765819 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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