The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asian regions from 1950 predicts life expectancy until 2300. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graph provides information about the average living years of various regions in Asia between 1950 and 2300.
In general, all areas increased wildly in terms of life expectancy in which "other Eastern Asia group" was slightly higher than the others. The Other Eastern Asia region has raised dramatically between 1950 and 2000, starting from around 55 years old to just under 80 years old. The figures in South-eastern Asia, Western Asia and China also soared up to around 70 years old, meanwhile, India and Other South-central Asia region was slightly lower 60 years old.
At the moment, most regions life expectancy has slowed down a little while the rank of each region remains unchanged. However, all figures are expected to continue going up and Other Eastern Asia average age is projected to reach a high expectation of about 85 years old by 2050 and end up at over 100 by 2300. Between now and 2300, China is set to excess most regions and it is forecast to hit its peak at approximately 95 years old by the end of the period, whereas all of the other areas such as India, Western Asia, South-eastern Asia and other south-central Asia will go up to 90 years old.
Overall, life expectancy has increased significantly from the past to now and it is likely to keep increasing gradually in the future and creates a huge gap with 1950. Except for China and Other eastern Asia where the figures surpass 95 years old, most regions are predicted to rise to around 90 years old by the year 2300.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'regions'' or 'region's'?
Suggestion: regions'; region's
...er 60 years old. At the moment, most regions life expectancy has slowed down a littl...
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Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s old by the end of the period, whereas all of the other areas such as India, Western Asia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, whereas, while, except for, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74242424242 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57299316897 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503787878788 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8499845205 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.111111111 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157747308005 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948606652196 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564376812639 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133644008768 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433483022162 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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