Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals can tackle these problems.
Number of people are increasing in cities, causes many problems, search as traffic science portion and this problems can harm human beings as well as animals.
As it is said, excess of everything is bad, the same problem for overpopulation. Overpopulation could bring many problems to human beings as well as to animals. The major problems number of people could be traffic and noise pollution. Traffic is one of the serious problems specially in a urban areas, which brings a lot of barriers in human lives, For instance, if a serious patient is moving to hospital and could be delayed because of traffic jam that person's life could be danger. Furthermore, and noise pollution is the result of overpopulation, many people of affected by air and noise pollution. For example, medical export site that numerous mental problems in that is because of these two problems which are mentioned above. The evidence of the problem is, well known City, New York City, read regarding traffic, noise in air pollution compared to countryside.
Saying in English, money makes the world go round. If a developed country improved in make white roads, so gai in urban areas, traffic problem can be solved because traffic is the result of overpopulation, Also, government Cruise educate new generation regarding the birth of children parents can also tell their children about of praying in aware them. They could also tell them if you have one or two children then you think is to educate them in feed them well. Everyone should think about the new of spring and about their education. However, government should impose high taxes on a father if one in only one he has more than two children. This is how the overpopulation could be reduced and future and that problem can be tackled.
To sum up, overpopulation can cause in a country's development, in all so that country might have a numerous illiterate people. , however, Government and public can tackle these problems together by educating the public and imposing high taxes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97928994083 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73527211168 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502958579882 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7845188408 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.1875 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290364378011 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956975826327 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651307889862 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168221110252 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522293607389 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.