Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that luck is the key factor for any success. However, I strongly oppose this viewpoint as acomplishment is largely generated by people themselves through their hard work and efforts
On the one hand, people determine their own lives by their own decisions. To be exact, there are some people who are born in a well-off family that end up living on a budget as they think they can rely on their intitial lucks forever, thus, they do not try to study or work properly. Otherwise, some unfortunate individuals born with disorder or innate diseases still manange to have a decent life or even more flourish than other normal people. As a result, luck does not appear in some cases where people thrive for their dreams
On the other hand, knowledge and diigence are the two critical aspects that contribute to any achievement. Specifically, by being more acknowledged and possesing more soft skills, people are able to handle more issues, make more sensible decisions and hence reach their goals faster. For example, luck can not bring you a diploma which is significant for applying for any company, nonetheless, you can get that by serious studying and practices. Consequently, luck sometimes plays a certain role in most success, however, great persistence and an open mind are indispensable in any equivalent
To conclude, although luck is believed to have substantial impacts on people’s accomplishments, I still strongly disagree with is since luck can not stay with any individual permanently but only their abilities that can assure their achievements
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, still, thus, well, for example, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86290290051 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619230769231 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4233764672 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.75 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.625 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165945349908 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662335235048 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459384964504 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101791905639 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352572027097 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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