Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that luck is the key factor for any success. However, I completely oppose this viewpoint as acomplishment is largely generated by people themselves through their hard work and efforts
On the one hand, it is undeniable that people determine their own lives by their own decisions. To be exact, there are some unfortunate individuals who are born with innate illness like limbs-loss or cardio vascular diseases still manange to have a decent life or even more flourish than other normal people. As a result, some people’s success are not influenced by luck but totally by their own endeavors. For instance: Nick Vujik is an Australian speaker who is world-wide popular by his motivated story from the beginning of a childe lost all 4 limbs to the greatest influencer who owns a company and has a happy family
On the other hand, knowledge and diigence are the two critical aspects that contribute to any achievement. Specifically, by being more acknowledged and possesing more soft skills, people are able to handle more issues, make more sensible decisions and hence reach their goals faster. For example, luck can not bring you a diploma which is significant to apply for any company, nonetheless, you can get that by seriously studying and practice. Consequently, luck sometimes plays a certain role in most success, however, without great persistence and an open mind it is less likely to happen the same
To conclude, although luck is believed to have substantial impacts on people’s accomplishments, I still strongly disagree with is since luck can not stay with any individual permanently but only their abilities that can assure their achievements
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, still, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1231884058 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91935468898 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634057971014 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.848029905 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.75 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145252164997 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618460225175 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524601472641 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914060011306 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407098528186 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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