Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try an d improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people argued that, it is better to adjust with the difficult situations like unsatisfied jobs or lack of money, while others claimed that it is good to overcome such crises in best ways. However, in my opinion, there are many strategies to surpass the every problems in our life , therefore do the best in every stages is the key to success than remained the same difficulties.
People who support to stay in bad situations often thinks that accept the reality is the best human nature. Along with that, they might believe every bad circumstances has something good in future. So, adjust the situation or live as the way of life is rather beneficial to argue for bright future, expanded Job opportunities or even financial crisis. For instance, having a job is better than unemployment even though the work is irrelevant or lack of satisfaction. Similarly, minimal wages would be enough instead of apply for increment or other trial to get more money. Furthermore, some oppose to more trials or improvements often thinks such arguments or applications may lead to further complications. It may be due to feeling of insecurity or poor self esteem.
On the other hand, many people trying to compete with the crises or warriors in front of their pathways by confidence and endless hardworking. This would be beneficial not only to them but also the employee and the society itself. Never ending opportunities would be available within a fraction of second whether to have a courage to pass through. It would be good enough to success in their life and to have a self satisfaction and realisation of the actual capability of themselves. For example, stay long for the similar undeveloped conditions would mitigate the overall wellbeing of mind and body to the core. However, doing something to manage or wake up from such things would enhance the living standard and status of the person. Most famous people including scientists, artists and celebrities are often trying their best to achieve a good stand in their life irrespective of the acceptance or adjusting nature of their early life.
To sum up, accepting the reality of various difficulties in life is okay to some extend. Nevertheless, in my perspective, being able to survive such credentials by personal abilities and capabilities would be more advantageous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...that it is good to overcome such crises in best ways. However, in my opinion, there are...
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Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o surpass the every problems in our life , therefore do the best in every stages i...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ry bad circumstances has something good in future. So, adjust the situation or live as th...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...us difficulties in life is okay to some extend. Nevertheless, in my perspective, being...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03886010363 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90058786881 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562176165803 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5246421093 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.055555556 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61111111111 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207914002348 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603809786957 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625481304812 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132222203624 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633688064538 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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