Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
major cities have many ways of income.that income may be generated through taxes or tourism or by getting some investments.Consider the city Hyderabad,where the charminar was situated.Hyderabad is one of the fastest developing cities across the world.it attracts the many foreigners across the world.Many companies and big giants such as tata groups,Infosys and many other companies are situated across it. This city has so much income and it will be go on even if government did not give any financial support.
Consider New Delhi,it is the capital of India.Every year there are many tourists to visit red fort and taj mahal which is nearer to it.The main source of income for these cities are through the tourism.so they may not require any additional fundings through the government to run the city.
But villages and rural areas across the cities requires additional funding.As there are no companies in those areas and no tourisim at those places these places have less income compared to the cities.Government should allocate money to see areas where will also be able to develop.
There is also some other way of seeing this.cities across the world are developing so fast and they are seen similar.Some cities share the same type of culture too.So tourists coming to the place spend less time in the cities and spend more in the areas where the city main cultural root is there. Since all the cultures and traditions roots comes from the villages, the people who visit will give utmost importance to them.
But in villages there are no perfect facilities as there in the cities.So to develop them they require funding from the government.There are no medical facilities in the villages.Even today there are some villages with out getting mobile signal.For those areas to be develop govt must spend more money on them.
To sum up,there is no necessity to provide funding to the major cities,as they can generate on their own.but the villages and some areas which are very far from the city need that funding. So govt must spend their money at that place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, as to, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9710982659 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82783640953 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514450867052 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.891449536 60.3974514979 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 191.111111111 118.986275619 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4444444444 23.4991977007 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190860373997 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091386209745 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495761801423 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10369164969 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588826528984 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 14.1392134831 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.1743820225 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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