Some people believe that family is more important than friends. What do you think?
There are a great debatable between the role of friends or family. While some people believe that family is more crucial than friends. However, while I agree that family will be a part of everyone in their life, I defenitely don’t think that it is important.
To begin with, it is argue that most parents will always stand up with their child on any circumstances. Although I concede that each of this children have their friend, who is always live along with them on some action, the problem is that some friendship often maintain on a few level of time. If any person have a problem in their life, they always have a place to rely on, which is called “ family”. These parent will give us an efficient advise so that they can tackle their problem so easily. As a result, a particular family always a major feature which appear on the live of people.
However, despite the role of family, I believe that friends can influence to the improvement of any people. Which means that they can also perform a supreme role in individual developments and give support to each other if they want. For example, if any individuals get trouble at anything but are not gained the support of family, friend will help with each other. Moreover, a person can give relief to his mind by talking with friends easily and the same peer group helpful to him directly or indirectly for creating an individual personality.
To conclude, both friend and family are the factors that ditacte how individuals improve and exist, and no one can live without any of them. In fact, I would argue that people should balance their times on not only family but also their buddy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... between the role of friends or family. While some people believe that family is more...
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Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'argued'.
Suggestion: argued
...it is important. To begin with, it is argue that most parents will always stand up ...
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Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...tances. Although I concede that each of this children have their friend, who is alwa...
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Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun level seems to be countable; consider using: 'few levels'.
Suggestion: few levels
...hat some friendship often maintain on a few level of time. If any person have a problem i...
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Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n not only family but also their buddy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64505119454 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40533232526 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7022318873 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2142857143 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182711139865 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758027380606 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987535045587 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136399122304 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998196009848 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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