When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is no doubt that money is one of the most important things in this world as they can be used to exchange for many necessary things for everyone’s life. Though there are still some drawbacks of being over considered to salary in occupation choosing, thinking carefully about how much the salary will be when finding an satisfactory job is still acceptable.
To begin with, money is the basic but crucial demand for everyone’s life. Every human in this world all need money for their own requirement: therefore, considering the salary is somehow considering their private life as well. Additionally, it is obvious that a high paid job will bring people a better life and vice versa. Everyone has to work industriously to be able to survive in this cruel world since the world has become more modern and the cost of everything has been increased steadily by time, which means if we want to have at least a stable life for ourselves , our financial situation must be at stable level to catch up with the rising cost of every product. Otherwise, they will not be affordable enough to get good things in need and it will lead their like to be a mess sooner of later.
In the other hand, it is difficult to argue that paying too much attention to salary will lose ourselves, which will lead to consequence that we just work for money without caring much about our health. I recommend myself as an example for this circumstance. My very first part-time job was amateur comic online translator and I was really lucky to successfully apply to a rather high-paid comic group. However, after that I started becoming a true workaholic for working all the time even without thinking of sleeping or eating much in the whole day. As a result, my health, memory and studying situation got worse after all due to short of sleeping for a long time. Moreover, sometimes the place offers good salary does not mean it is a good working environment. Salary is only material aspect, while an appropriate working place will come from good boss and friendly colleagues.
In conclusion, from my point of view and pratical experiences, while I entirely agree that salary is a considering problem when it comes to a suitable job for us, I also believe that if we can control the money effectively, salary will turn to our strongest motivation to work more efficiently instead being underpressure by it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ow much the salary will be when finding an satisfactory job is still acceptable. ...
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Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ave at least a stable life for ourselves , our financial situation must be at stab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, well, while, after all, as to, at least, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77053140097 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7082086259 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553140096618 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.2016967529 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.666666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969504888325 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333403819334 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384508388994 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786645350182 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466305513769 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.