Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Many people suppose that it is easier to well-being lifestyle in the countryside. Other surmise there are health benefits its of aliveness in cities. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of in countryside that it is easier to health lifestyle than in cities. First, from larger spaces and stunning views to community sentiment and peace or so to speak, country life has all its own romance. This benefits support, presumably tends not only to health but also makes you feel relaxed when living in the countryside. Second, in the cites have many benefits, but air quality is definitely not one of them. Congested traffic, industry and lack of tress mean that pollution is especially concentrated in urban areas. These pollutants can cause all kinds of damage to the lugs while increasing the risk of serious diseases. Meanwhile, when living in the countryside, air quality candles air improved. Which benefits healthy with people in countryside. In fact, it is acknowledged that the environment have low emissions from factories and cars id imperative to foster a beautiful green environment and good for human health.
Nevertheless, the cities have some benefits in having a healthy lifestyle. First, in the cities have many people work hard at sports. Everyone is also known to choose their age-appropriate sport. Besides, in recent years, sports such as tennis and swimming have been intensely enjoyed by people in the province. Second, government take care with build a healthy lifestyle because government was promote propaganda to raise awareness for all levels, sectors and the masses to help people understand the meaning and role of a healthy lifestyle. Now, the government is trying to limit monopolies out of factories and gradually build a healthy lifestyle.
This above essay was shows both sides, strengths and weaknesses of both. From this above essay I find that living in the countryside is still easier to have a healthier life than in the city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...side, air quality candles air improved. Which benefits healthy with people in country...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'promoted'.
Suggestion: promoted
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, well, while, in fact, such as, so to speak
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15476190476 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79467930652 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2225666353 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305088508966 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863018826959 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659912178296 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173419709817 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273304653589 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.