To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Nowadays, it is generally argued that getting to know the fundamentals of the society we live in, is directly related to residing and studying about vast cities which have access to numerous facilities. In my opinion, I partially agree with the above statement and the contemplating factors for the same are stated by explaining two of them.
To begin with, big cities have skyrocketed facilities and opportunities. In other words, the people who belong to a certain area will be well aware of the surroundings and the opportunities they provide for the residents which indirectly shares the knowledge about the society. For instance, the economic status of the nation is directly proportional to the facilities they offer which in turn speaks the important characteristics of the area one lives in. To connect this, it is linked to the pupils who live in the neighborhood, who is aware of the whereabouts of the city.
On the downside, several hidden gems are present in the small cities. For instance, the famous historical architecture of all times stone chariot is located in a small village called Hampi. If this place is not studied the importance of the structures and the stories of kings will be left unsaid. It is nearly taff to define the characteristics of society just by having a peek into the vast areas and by ignoring the smaller ones. As history will be unknown. This is important to understand the place where we come from.
In conclusion, I second my outlook that all places, be it small or large in the area have equal prominence to understand the functioning of the nation or the place one wishes to study. Irrespective of the country, all the places play a vital role in understanding the characteristic of the nation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...areas and by ignoring the smaller ones. As history will be unknown. This is import...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 297.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90235690236 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.977341147 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548821548822 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7042673407 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174409762326 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552795510314 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503909739494 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993158521884 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211277537829 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...areas and by ignoring the smaller ones. As history will be unknown. This is import...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 297.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90235690236 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.977341147 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548821548822 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7042673407 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174409762326 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552795510314 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503909739494 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993158521884 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211277537829 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.