Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some assume that music, which is played in all cultures and societies these days, has only positive effects on both individuals and societies, whereas others consider it to negatively influence either of them. In my view, benefits of music being prominent in all nations, such as being a source of income and making people fulfilled in their lives, is quite vital for people.
Some people might come to think that music has side effects on us for handful of reasons. First, various types of music are being produced, one of which is sad. Whenever people are subject to attacks of depression, they may listen to music as such in order to overcome the stress. The consequences, however, often show the opposite. Sad music can contribute to illnesses of high seriousness as mental disorders or problems with heart, since it makes people suffer the sorrow more. Second, music that is well beyond the acceptable content, is sometimes allowed to be released. As behavour of people is usually contagious, side effects can be seen in people, especially youngsters.
Nevertheless, I strongly believe that music does bring essential benefits to people. Initially, without music, people would live monotonous life. Being one of the main sources of amusement, it puts people in a good mood. In clubs, for instance, many indulge in dancing and bonding with their close or other people. Even films will become tedious, if no sounds are included in them. Apart from that, some rely on it as a profession, and earn their living via music. Musicians perform in concerts hoping to get their share, and absence of this industry would disable people of getting what they desrve.
By way of conclusion, even if some unconscious people tap music for wrong purposes, it more importantly resonates our life with joy, and allows people to profit from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, well, whereas, apart from, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99019607843 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57231063577 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62091503268 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0309295699 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8235294118 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323379952251 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934865154094 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820178351543 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190883728248 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814814894682 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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