Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? all jobs should provide some opportunity for physical exercise.
physical fitness is necessary for every human being. we enjoy our work when we are fit and healthy. but Today's, life style has been disturbed by office busy schedule and surrounding. Either employees are stick to a chair for whole day or exposed to harmful environment in manufacturing industries. therefore, I agree with the statement all the jobs should provide some opportunity fro physical exercise.
if we take an example of the employees in co-operate company. Due to their busy schedule, people sent their whole office hour, sitting on a chair and looking at computer screen. According to research, it is found that human health has been disturbed alot after 19th Century when people take to spend most of their time at office.
Along with company work, human are so invloved at home as well that they don't time to take care off their body and physical fitness. therefore, they must be some activity related to physical exercise should be provide at job so that employees can take care for them. This will not only help to regulate their metabolism but also make them active at office.
Similarly, people, who do job in the manufacturing industries, are exposed to harmful environment. Athough, company take care of emoloyees health by conducting free medical check up every month but if they also include some physical exercise then it will help them to saty health and feel energetic whole day.
These activities realted to physical exercise should be made as a part of job schedule so that people get concern about their health and will stay fit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, similarly, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97348484848 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55200444725 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7262286218 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7857142857 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245319394417 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893677162364 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139250227312 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135853017718 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931974784879 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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