Some people think that the best way to make road transport safer is to make vehicle drivers take a driving test every year. Agree or disagree?
Many people argued that the best way to secure road transportation is by taking a driving license annually. Personally, I partly disagree with this view.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe that testing the ability of driving is the optimum way to improve the safety of road transportation. The principal reason for this is that driving exams often increase the awareness of safe traffic with its tremendous impact on other people's lives. Take car accidents, for example, most accidents result from non-licensed drivers who lack certainty while driving. A driving license can be a key factor in improving how people travel by vehicles carefully. As a result, the security when driving will increase in how people transport daily.
On the other hand, I am convinced that the annual driving test is not the optimum solution to improve the security on the road as there are many other ways to solve this issue. Firstly, in order to reduce the percentage of accidents, governments should publish traffic regulations restrictedly by raising the penalties to a higher level. Take drunk-driver, for example, they should be arrested and fined a half-year period in jail for breaking a law. This may influence how civilians are considerate if they try to break the rules. Moreover, drivers can also be forced to work in morgues where they placed dead people in car accidents; this helps them realize deeply about the tragedy they may face if they committed an accident. As a result, this unforgettable experience will influence positively people's consciousness for a long time.
In conclusion, I believe that having a driving test periodically can improve road safety. However, it is not the best way to reduce traffic accidents as there are various solutions that can be created to tackle this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86344586508 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1554756194 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241981184433 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876091132561 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732911767289 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174221878808 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662024016254 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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