Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements?
It is acceptable that the death rate is increasing in the modern era. Society is affected by pollution environment and dirty housing. That is why, illness is increasing with the passage of time. some people assert that the Government should be provided good accommodation and clean climate. I will shed light on the statement in the following paragraphs.First and foremost, the public is suffering from diseases like respiratory. In the modern era, MSN needs increase. Thus, factories are built in urban areas. This makes the environment dirty. As a result, smoke is being emitted by new industries. Therefore, the government should implement new law regarding this situation. The industry colony should be far away from the inhabited areas. In addition, traffic has also increased its peak. everyone is travelling to job and education. They have their own vehicles such as car, bike. Thus, roads are crowded from this modern facility. The roads are narrow as well as break. The Authority should be built new wide roads along with repair break roads. For example, public transport should be provided from the Government.On the other hand, there is another reason, residents migrating from their residence to the city to work. So, the population of the city has increased, which is why, housing is expensive. They are not able to stay at this place. As a result, they buy cheap. it's dirty. Sometimes, many people stop on the road, where there is a huge infection. So, many diseases like malaria, cancer, lung infections are spreading. The Minister of Health, Department should develop some rules in place of home. Employers should create a labor colony of poor employees who give freebies. For example, flies and mosquitoes are developing in the city, because there is no clean system. In the end, many of the people living in this way are having dangerous diseases. In conclusion, bad environment and dirty residence, this is main reason to increase diseases. The citizens keep alive country and drive into the future. The Government should many amenities to people so that, they remain helthy.
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- Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements 73
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- Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements 67
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09011627907 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70454311758 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578488372093 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3232616783 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3666666667 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4666666667 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.76666666667 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175460638161 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386408729639 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040870893325 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175460638161 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.06 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...is increasing with the passage of time. some people assert that the Government shoul...
^^^^
Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...e statement in the following paragraphs.First and foremost, the public is suffering f...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 793, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everyone
...n, traffic has also increased its peak. everyone is travelling to job and education. The...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
... should be provided from the Government.On the other hand, there is another reason...
^^
Line 1, column 1379, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...his place. As a result, they buy cheap. its dirty. Sometimes, many people stop on t...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09011627907 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70454311758 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578488372093 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3232616783 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3666666667 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4666666667 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.76666666667 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175460638161 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386408729639 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040870893325 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175460638161 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.06 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.