Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level
It is argued that people making top wages are beneficial for society, as well as their country, whereas others believe that the setting of maximum wages limit needs to be addressed by governments. From my perspective, I agree with the former view.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some people believe that administration should set a limit on earnings. The first reason is the imbalance between disadvantage and wealthy people could be caused plenty of adverse issues for human society. As can be expected, economic inequality leads to be increasing the social situation, such as crimes, robbers, thieves, and so on. Under these circumstances, standards of living have been more prone to being under threat, especially be resulted in mental abilities’ children. In some firms, the salaries of chief executive offices should be cut down, instead of that, investing money on marking to boost sales figures to broaden more branches and create employment prospects for citizens.
On the other hand, I contend that having maximum wages legislation could be harmful to the economic nation. Firstly, it might be contributed to a tendency to skilled workers to leave their home countries and work in the foreign environments that pay them well. The absence of outstanding employees devoting their excellent talent to nation corporations attributes to mitigate the economic developments. Also, there are lost thousands of dollars to hire a professional engineer from another country that is why companies should give them great remuneration that deserve with their knowledge and skills. For example, in several multinational enterprises, such as Google or Facebook, employees are offered extraordinarily high pay packages.
To conclude, although some people think that governments should adopt a maximum wage law to reduce the social situations, I personally believe that a well-educated and skilled workforce deserve to have a particularly well-paid job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, well, whereas, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42671009772 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00906332873 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622149837134 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8333315785 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.153846154 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1803028963 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580836784522 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453622605467 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104367914245 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172223329833 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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