Plastic bags are terrible for the environment. They should be banned everywhere
The issue in hand caused a lot of debate world wide. People are giving utterly different opinions regard this topic. On one hand some believe that plastic bags are harmful and should be banned, other believe this is an exaggerated opinion.
Personally, I think that plastic bags are not that harmful.
Many conservative people propose that plastic bag issue is critical. As the pollution which it caused to manufacture them. In my opinion, I beg to differ, all manufactures cause the same amout of pollution whethear it is for producing plastic or for any other reason. In fact plastic may benefit the environment since it is easy to recycle. Last year I went to Japan, and I saw a wonderful invention in the streets of tokyo. People throw plastic bottles and cups in this machine to be recycled and surpriseingly after twenty-five minutes a person can collect a new gift from this device. If a pollution can occur, they would not have been make this device.
Moreover, other alternative options of bag can exectue more damage to the environment. The source of other materials is mainly trees. Therefore, cutting these trees from the forest will lead to deforestation and that will affect the whole universe badly. In other words, decreased amount of plants means decreased amount of animals . We all aware that animals have various benefits that varies from food to other benefits. Not only this, but insufficent amout of plants will affect the environment directly by increasing the chance of global warming. The whole universe in connected through a cycle and by breaking this cycle a severe damage can happen. As a result, the humans will struggle to survive in this difficult situation.
in conclusion, although plastic bags have apros and cons . I believe that advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In my opinion, the use of plastic should not be banned. We can use recycle it and use it in other different purpose and also todecrease the possible damage to the environment which can be caused by other alternatives.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...he issue in hand caused a lot of debate world wide. People are giving utterly different op...
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Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...he issue in hand caused a lot of debate world wide. People are giving utterly different op...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ose that plastic bag issue is critical. As the pollution which it caused to manufa...
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Line 6, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...plants means decreased amount of animals . We all aware that animals have various ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...survive in this difficult situation. in conclusion, although plastic bags have ...
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Line 8, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lthough plastic bags have apros and cons . I believe that advantages outweigh the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99410029499 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73138465917 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536873156342 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9392667775 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6086956522 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7391304348 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213051989843 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597212434031 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693850625603 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13865201801 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607177391878 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...he issue in hand caused a lot of debate world wide. People are giving utterly different op...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...he issue in hand caused a lot of debate world wide. People are giving utterly different op...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ose that plastic bag issue is critical. As the pollution which it caused to manufa...
^^
Line 6, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...plants means decreased amount of animals . We all aware that animals have various ...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...survive in this difficult situation. in conclusion, although plastic bags have ...
^^
Line 8, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lthough plastic bags have apros and cons . I believe that advantages outweigh the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99410029499 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73138465917 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536873156342 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9392667775 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6086956522 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7391304348 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213051989843 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597212434031 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693850625603 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13865201801 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607177391878 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.