Some people claim that what people eat in many Western countries is unhealthy and their diet is getting worse. Critics say that these countries should change their diet.
What are your opinions on this?
In this day and age, a few people argue that what people consume in their meals in various Western nations is undesirable and the deteriorated diet is occurring. Numerous reporters have said that those countries who eat Western diets should change their eating routines unless their health conditions get worse. From my point of view, I completely concur with this statement.
As it can be seen, the characteristics of Western diets contain a high consumption of red meats, enormous calories layered on foods, and a huge number of using butter and cream in daily meals. Following this tendency, all of these aforementioned information related to the containment of Western eating habits have an adverse bearing on not only customers' well-being but also their mental health. Due to the fact that, there are a variety of Americans commiting obesity from overusing butter and cream which have a great upward trend annually. As becoming an obesity patient, their mental being changed promptly by a variety of pressures will be placed on them from the society where many censures are existed about their appearance, so that why people who are catched an obesity can easily get irritated.
With the threatening consequences from eating Western diets, I opine that it is thankfully starting to change to handle this phenomenon promptly with a vast number of solutions. For one, eliminating the existence of canned foods and fast foods in the menu of our daily meals can be a workable method to help the people out of difficulties from being overweight. Moreover, people should increase the enormous quantities of vegetables and fresh fruits to balance the diet, which is a great tool for people to release the amount of fat in the body, and as result, this technique will do their health a service.
In conclusion, Western diets have a bad effect on people’s health conditions leading to the high level of people suffering with health problems, especially obesity. Additionally, we can address these difficulties by changing their eating ways to get them out of worse diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12316715543 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78048860157 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560117302053 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3135784499 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.583333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4166666667 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361882146076 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130465339465 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969800385628 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24425662206 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103009309031 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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