The maps below show an industrial area in the town Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The given maps illustrate the structure of the Norbiton industrial area in the present day and the intention for this modification in the following day.
By comparing the former and latter appearance of the Norbiton industrial area, certain alternations are noteworthy. From an overall perspective, it is apparent that a number of accommodations make way for the previous factories, and some entertaining facilities are constructed on this land.
Taking the first look at the maps before changing, this area was merely covered by industrial businesses that locate their factories at the roundabout. Moreover, to the North of the river is the Farmland and there is no existence of any infrastructures or societal services.
Moving to the second figure, it is notable that housing will supplant all the factories, and more streets and directions will be expanded. In this image, one roundabout will be established which will be situated behind the first roundabout at the center. Moreover, playgrounds and schools will be built to the East of the map while medical centers and stores will be constructed to the South East and South West on the land respectively. Finally, the advent of a bridge in the planning design will help the resident have a chance to set up one more accommodation and this place will no longer seem like an industrial area.
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| 2023-03-05 | jenifer Le | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11312217195 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02605002732 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579185520362 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.1609453523 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 125.555555556 76.5299724578 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157055239233 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692107137976 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662370558656 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110117525205 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385712746214 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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