Write about the following topic:
A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In present scenario, the status of a person and the properties they own become identity of human. It is undeniable that values of person according to what etiquette they posses, have no more importance. I am completely agree with this notion and I will discuss the possible reasons along with an example in my essay.
First of all, on one hand, the meaning of status in today's society has drastically changed. The people believe that those who have more money and those who own branded cars and high-rise banglows along with high paid job have higher position in their society and people judge them as wealthiest person because they believe that these all material brings happiness and prosperity to them which is not always seems true. For example, any popular film star, they have their own social status, facilities and luxurious life. However, they may lack basic etiquettes which is another most important thing which human should possess.
On the other hand, behaviour of person also has an equal importance as wealthy materials which makes them real hero of his life which includes kindness, trust, honour and much more valuable manners. But these has become old fashioned and do not have more values in today's life. It is said that "Books cannot be judged from its title", same way it is not always true that the person who has higher status in the society, always has a good nature.
To conclude, according to my opinion, people should not be judged as per their status in the society and what they possess, instead of, their basic nature and etiquette should be considered and main reason behind their lost goes to today's lifestyle and changed in meaning of what called social status.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ave no more importance. I am completely agree with this notion and I will discuss the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91724137931 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34375228894 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1440053151 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219310943991 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798510557346 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371478469636 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133556353068 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232448068042 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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