The best way for a student to make new friends is by traveling.
Friends are one of the essential parts of people’s lives as humans live in a society where socialization counts. Making friends is not a piece of cake for many people, especially introverts who prefer living alone. From my standpoint, traveling is the best way for a student to make friends.
Firstly, during traveling, one can select which person to be their friend by observing people’s manners throughout the day. Experts have advised couples that before they move in together, every couple should at least travel for one time. The reason behind this is that people can carefully observe each other during the trip and get to know one another more deeply. This concept can also be applied to friends, who are not moving in together, but having such an experience, people can definitely have a more comprehensive understanding of one person instead of just knowing their surface. For example, some people may behave nicely in a sports team while playing sports, but it is hard to know other parts of this person. Maybe the person who shows much respect to others during the play yells at waiters in restaurants. However, by spending time with a person all day, people would know how the person treats everyone and whether this person would show respect to everyone regardless of their social identity.
In addition, not only can a person make new friends during the trip, but they are more likely to enjoy the beautiful scenery and understand local cultures with their new friends. People seldomly travel alone since they want to have people to share the joy during the trip. By meeting new friends, one can feel more immersed in the journey, and the content brought by communicating with each other will promote their happiness even more. This is because they have somebody to talk to, who tends to feel the same way as them, which will arouse travelers’ compassion. They can share their feelings about beautiful scenery with one another, which may also bring up new topics for travelers to discuss, like their past travel experiences, the similar view in their hometowns, and so on. In this way, a good vibe during the trip is created simply by meeting new friends.
To sum up, the best way to make new friends for students is traveling, for not only people can get to know a person more deeply and comprehensively, but they can share thy happiness during the trip with each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, while, at least, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85609756098 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48836555136 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8315098136 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.117647059 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1176470588 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281063858987 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110208023731 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132275597014 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247395555984 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132684918431 0.0645574589148 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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