Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The past few decades have witnessed an escalating rate of environmental issues. While a number of people advocate that the depletion of particular species of plants and animals is the main threat to environment, others opine that there are more significant environmental threats. From my perspective, both of these problems are harsh and have numerous negative impacts on environmental health.
On the one hand, the depletion of some plants and animals has a plethora of detrimental effects on the environment. It stands to the reason that the balance in the ecosystem could be erased because of overhunting and deforestation. Numerous rare animals are on the brink of extinction due to human greed and a large number of medical plants are overexploited to meet the demand of economic purposes. Take crocodiles as a typical example, plenty of them are killed in order to make people’s clothes and accessories such as jackets, wallets, hats, and so on, thus, making them be one of the most animals needing preservation because there is just a delicate number of them are protected in the zoos or wild gardens.
In my own view, not only the decrease of animals and plants have detrimental effects on the environment but other problems also deteriorate the ecosystem. Firstly, overexploitation of natural resources can harm our planet. When people exploit those kinds of resources, they need to open the path or destruct several caves, lands, and forests. This means that these harsh actions can diminish the environment’s health and put them to limits. Furthermore, climate changes are the main culprits behind several environmental problems. The main reason for this is that our planet cannot adapt itself to the quick changes of the weather and climate. Moreover, some of the consequences resulting from it are global warming, ice melting, greenhouse gases, and so on can destroy the environment seriously. For instance, because of the ice melting, numerous polar bears cannot find food and habitat to survive.
In conclusion, it is my view that besides the depletion of some animals and plants, both natural resources overexploitation and climate changes also have numerous detrimental impacts on the environment.
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28169014085 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02346047295 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532394366197 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.59446283 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.1875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26310093903 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821338911119 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849953554949 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168113329384 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812760483873 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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