Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination,while other think that tere are more important factors such as money and appearance.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A minority of individuals in contemporary society believe that success in life comes from effort and determination, whereas others believe that several factors namely money and appearance are equally important. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the statements above and the following essay will support my point.
On the one hand, people in the 4.0 industrial era tend to care more about the outside appearance rather than the inner spirit. For instance, a famous Vietnamese singer name Duc Phuc had plastic surgery to gain a large amount of fans. Although, has a huge range of talent but a majority of the audience has a positive view of him due to his appearance. Thus, it is hard for all individuals to achieve success without paying attention to other facial factors.
On the other hand, having a good working personality helps every person gain lots of knowledge and experiences. Nevertheless, owning a large amount of valuable things still brings a lot of benefits. In particular, teenagers born into affluent families have more conditions and amenities than underprivileged ones. As a result, finances also momentous factors that affect the success of inhabitants in the current society.
In conclusion, good looking appearance, a stable condition still need to be accompanied by determination and hard work to make various achievements. Furthermore, the social community should not judge and deny other's efforts to touch the door of success just because they are not good-looking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28033472803 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03082556544 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686192468619 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6416338047 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.166666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196217358801 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567661228477 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489134976222 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10348129961 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316818822084 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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