Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood, or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, the issue of doing volunteer work has always been a constant debate. Although it is commonly believed that high school programmes should involve doing volunteer work as a crucial part of education, I partly agree with this statement as there are some reasons.
There is no doubt that doing unpaid community services benefits students so far for their future. However, doing such things might drive students to neglect their studies since doing volunteer work requires numerous times and attempts to prepare for the journey. Hence, students would feel less interested in school life. Moreover, doing charity with forcefulness causes stress and anxiety to students, for the reason that teenagers have to do the work which has been manipulated by the school as students have a discouragement in doing community services. Thus, students would have a misperceiving of volunteer work.
Nevertheless, taking part in unpaid activities at teenage ages raises their awareness. It is clear that students are able to train their characteristics through doing spontaneous work as they could experience the harsh life and sympathize with other people. In addition, students would accumulate various skills for their future paths. For instance, working for a charity acquired communication with other people to raise funding, which helps teenagers become more professional in convincing others. Therefore, students after graduating would perceive precisely their ambition in their future careers.
In conclusion, it is possible that volunteer work can become an essential part of school programmes, but there are some side effects that people should be aware of.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.578125 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81587254392 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59765625 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6808451507 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282837163016 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101985768038 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743038634577 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179781546808 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040797054578 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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