The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the average highest temperatures every day in four separate cities, namely Auckland, Christchurch, London, and Edinburgh.
Overall, it can be seen that, in the first half-year period, there are downtrends in the average maximum temperatures of two cities: Auckland and Christchurch, but in the second half-year period, these figures increase. However, the opposite is true for the two rest cities.
In the first month of the year, the daily maximum temperatures in Auckland, and Christchurch are approximately 22.5 and 25 degrees. The figures for the two British cities are both just over 5 degrees. July witnesses a gradual decline in the temperatures of the two New Zealand cities to just over 10 degrees ( in Christchurch), and 15 degrees ( in Auckland). In contrast, the temperatures of London and Edinburgh rapidly go up from 5 degrees to around 17 and 22 degrees, respectively.
In the last half-year period, there is moderate growth in the temperatures of Auckland and Christchurch, and they all reach above 20 degrees at the end of the year. On the other hand, the figures in the two United Kingdom cities both drop to around 7 degrees, which are a bit higher than that of January.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...w Zealand cities to just over 10 degrees in Christchurch, and 15 degrees in Auck...
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Suggestion:
...degrees in Christchurch, and 15 degrees in Auckland. In contrast, the temperatur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07920792079 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00163338209 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549504950495 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8530668851 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355819504861 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148035077127 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535965782468 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207143047928 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507480112576 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.