There are an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbours. What causes this situation? How to solve it?
In the modern era, every single person is busy in the career and goals and they do not have enough time to know their neighbor in proper way as well as, more and more masses are leading self-centered lives. For that reason, there are an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbors. In my opinion, I myself think that people should take some time to take care your family and get to know your neighbors. And the essay below will clarify my point of view to some extent.
To begin with, the reason why people don’t know their neighbors is every person have a very busy time as well, people more prefer to do work in free-time for good future and, they want the best position in their office or workplace. For example, most of the masses do work late hours and, sometimes they left their own family as well as, other relations. Moreover, another cause is new technology like as every age group uses mobile phones and they do all work on it with it, they connect with dear once’s with help of it due to it people do not have time for knowing about their neighbor.
On the other hand side, this problem is also quite simple to solve them. Head of society should provide a small park and organize different sort of activities as well as, thing with it, all neighbors easily meet with their neighbors and, they properly come to know about them. For example, people should take the time off on festivals and celebrate them together as well as, every society has organized lunch or dinner for everyone. Futhermore, parents should encourage their children to play outdoor games with other friends.
In conclusion, everyone forgets the importance of community and, people are busy in other activities. So, individuals meet with their new neighbors and do help in different sorts of works with it, everybody easily knows about their neighbors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, sort of, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67889908257 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27736573929 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519877675841 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0598548531 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233132957584 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100521671087 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111037323666 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150197869273 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511828883658 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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