Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think is a positive or negative development?
Due to the fact that same goods can be purchased anywhere globally, the similarity among nations is increasing considerably. I believe it is a negative trend that countries are becoming less different. For one thing, it brings loss of cultural diversity and, for another, it could also be detrimental to the travel industry.
Every single country has its own identity, history and culture, so becoming similar to other countries would be removed all these kinds of things. To illustrate, in a number of provinces of my country we have some locally clothes which are rooted in our culture. yet, many Iranians prefer to shop for fashionable clothes from high-end transnational stores rather than to buy clothes from stores that sell locally products. Therefore, in the future local dress are disappeared even means that the next generation will not know what their grandparents wear. As a result of that, the identity of the country would be faded.
In addition, countries becoming more alike could affect the tourism sector. Many people desire to pay a visit to another place to gain unique experience. For example, Indian food is most attractive to international tourists ,However, now Indian restaurants can be found all over the world, which means people no longer need to fly to India to have a taste of real Indian food. This could result in a decrease in the number of foreign visitors to that country.
In conclusion, I believe it is a full of drawbacks trend that countries are becoming less different.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 263, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yet
...lothes which are rooted in our culture. yet, many Iranians prefer to shop for fashi...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ost attractive to international tourists ,However, now Indian restaurants can be f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00396825397 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74938722874 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623015873016 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2855886316 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170979821092 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593006502343 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546060351334 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954299894036 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157822553833 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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