Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations provided they operate within the law is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both the views presented.
In recent times, the mental and physical well being of humans as individuals and as collective beings have garnered much priority among many sectors and industries around the world. It is a widely accepted fact that mentally and physically sound human beings are an asset to a society, while those who struggle with either of those must receive the help necessary to remedy it. The prompt recommends that it is a belief held by some citizens that corporations should prioritize encouraging the well-being of communities in which they function. I mostly agree with this statement for the following reason, which will be discussed below. However, I do concede that as a corporation, their goal should also be in ensuring that the company makes enough profit that would help them sustain in the long run.
To begin with, it is a moral responsibility of all citizens to be conscious about the mental and physical health of the society as a whole. In that regard, when a corporation is attempting to make themselves known in their potential consumer market, they would also wish to adhere to this ideology. For example, a manufacturer of edible soybean oil will constantly promote their products with the message that this kind of oil is good for the cardiovascular health of consumers. They will try to do that because by promoting the idea that oily food is detrimental to health would be hazardous to their business model and at the same time paint them in a negative light for promoting poor eating habits. Hence, to prevent themselves from getting into either of these scenarios, brands like Saffola Oil continue to endorse their products, sometimes even with the help of celebrities and health experts as brand ambassadors, with the idea that their product is beneficial for people’s health.
However, I concede that corporations, especially if they intend to survive in a sector with a lot of competition, must also prioritize making profits. If sufficient profits are not ensured compared to their expenditures, then it is likely that the company may not survive. Moreover, in an extreme case, if the company ends up becoming bankrupt, this will undoubtedly affect the number of people who are employed by the company. They will lose their jobs and any other benefits or insurance provided by the company. This will again impact the well being of the very people involved with operations of the organization.
Many may argue that focusing on monetary benefits should be the sole responsibility of corporations. However, as illustrated above, while that may be valid up to a certain extent, it is also of utmost importance that corporations engage in publicizing the physical and mental well being of the communities in which they run their operations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
...ith operations of the organization. Many may argue that focusing on monetary benefit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05689277899 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8537222426 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525164113786 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2010614666 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.941176471 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8823529412 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221887842775 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757345582327 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054916210729 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140286423432 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215079530944 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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