A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Education is necessary for the mental and social growth of an individual. The prompt claims that a nation should follow the same educational curriculum during school days. I mostly agree with the claim for three reasons. which I will elucidate below. However, I do concede that a national curriculum should be developed considering all levels of students.
Firstly, following an equal curriculum all over the nation will bring equal growth for each and every student from society with an equal level of knowledge. For instance, if the same subjects and the same level of complexities followed in an urban and ruler area. It will result in the overall equal development of students from urban and ruler areas. When these students from the ruler area will pursue a graduate degree from the college they will not consider themselves as undermined students, instead of that, they will feel more confident and ready to compete with the other competitors from an urban area.
Secondly, it will be easy for the government to track a nationwide educational growth index and required action will be taken at a national level. For example, if any district's educational index is going down then the government officers can take required action or find a required solution for that specific district. To improve the overall index. This type of tracking will be impossible if the same curriculum is not used nationwide. So, it's better to use the nationwide same syllabus.
Finally, during school days not all students are mature enough to find their area of interest or field of career. So, the same curriculum will help them to explore all fields of education and during college days they can choose the best field of study.
In conclusion, I do concede that the national curriculum should be developed at such a level that end users like a student from the ruler area will understand it easily without spending many resources. However, I do agree with the claim that the nationwide same curriculum is the best choice considering the above three reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
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Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...agree with the claim for three reasons. which I will elucidate below. However, I do c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00293255132 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62676071657 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480938416422 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.5309087914 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7777777778 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234636010605 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846588174168 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522307234018 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148315137029 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618505804483 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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