Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school. Do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh its drawbacks?
Today, with education becoming increasingly prioritized, choosing an appropriate studying method plays a crucial role in modern society. In light of this, many parents decide to educate their children at home as they believe the outcome will be better than sending them to school. Although this phenomenon has some benefit, I would argue that schools will most facilitate a student’s development.
Admittedly, teaching children at home is advantageous to an extent. One benefit of this decision could be that they can concentrate more on subjects and fields considered necessary for their future tomorrow life. Therefore, time and energy will not be squandered on knowledge that has negligible application for their careers. However, modern education has prevalently innovated to facilitate students to focus on essential subjects and relevant areas for their future. To illustrate, if a student nurtures a dream of becoming a doctor or working in the medical field, one is unrequired to study geography.
Besides the aforementioned benefit, there are drawbacks embedded in not going to educational centers. One significant issue of this phenomenon is that the absorbing knowledge method could be inappropriate. This is because children can be misdirected. Knowing nowhere to start or receiving no aid from peers and specialized people such as teachers, children might find studying struggling. In addition, lacking practical skills is another disadvantage. Being unrelated to school - an open and energetic environment, contributes to children having weak interpersonal skills, thus living alienated from the outside once they become more routine with being alone in their four walls shut.
In conclusion, although self-taught might agree with children to center on subjects they find worthy, it does not seem ideal for most juveniles. Easy to be misoriented and have difficulties in communication once they have grown mature; individuals need to look deeply into the circumstance before refusing the school option.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, as for, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65245901639 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07961760585 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.192759588 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231569627449 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750339729923 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825840040478 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140745296259 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068024247224 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, as for, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65245901639 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07961760585 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.192759588 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231569627449 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750339729923 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825840040478 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140745296259 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068024247224 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.