Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
There is no shortage of opinions that it is not essential for youth to be organized and well-planned. I have a different opinion.I strongly believe that the young people must be systematized in order to live a successful life in this modern era.In the following essay, I intended to put forth my points and reasons for support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that if our younger generation utilizes their precious time in a systematic way, they will be more productive. Moreover, when they have this ability of doing assigned tasks in a timely manner, they will be more focused on their studies like submitting assignments on time. As a result, they will perform extraordinarily in the academics which in turn give them better job opportunities.To exemplify, one of my high school colleagues always struggles with his assignments and exam preparations due to lack of organization. However, when he discusses his issue with me, I recommend him to plan all the work ahead of time in a proper way.Evidently, as he applied my advice, his grades have taken a drastic shift and now he is a top notch dentist. Therefore, this example illustrates how managing stuff is important in this fast paced lifestyle.
Secondly, to explain broadly, when a new generation doesn't have the capability of doing work in a sequence, they may develop an imbalance in their social and professional life. Consequently, they become depressed and stressed out because they don't have any time to socialize. Eventually, they lose their sincere friends and become distant from their family. For instance, it is best explained by my own personal experience, when I started my job I failed to handle my work and family equilibrium. As a consequence, I suffer from severe anxiety and depression.Thus, this experience taught me that if I had tackled my life in an organized way then I would not have gone through that rough patch of my life as these modern times are more complicated than the older ones.
In conclusion, I certainly have a firm belief that youth must have organizational skills.I feel this way because it helps them in every aspect of their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95856353591 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.029480064 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591160220994 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4350124931 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.076923077 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 5.45110844103 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200308285403 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680608072012 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629812761521 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138554959014 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710279936342 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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