Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the globalization process, we have witnessed the development in industrialisation from many countries in the world. This would cause a dispute about whether money from the government or private company's budget should be spent on. There are scores of people who assert that the development of a country depends on the number of lavish and massive building constructions. By contrast, money is supremely believed to be invested in hospital and school infrastructures by other people. From my perspective, money is necessary to be invested in both ideas of the statement.
On the one hand, there are several rationales to acknowledge that constructions of buildings are worthy to be invested in. One of the most compelling reasons is that a country with a large number of modern buildings is consistently considered a standard of a developed country. For instance, in many industrial countries such as The United States of America, England, France have a variety of buildings with splendid architecture and modern technique. Subsequently, those constructions are considered to be the representation of a country’s development. Another substantial reason is that pouring money into buildings is a method for unemployees. Due to the fact that the rate of citizens who have not had a stable job is constantly a concern for the nation's authority. Additionally, the increasing number of towers or building construction are the opportunity for co-workers to take advantage and create their own paths.
On the other hand, there is a justificated reason to convince that money should be spent correspondingly in school and hospital facilities. In particular, education and medical are both indispensable fields to be concerned by the government and residents in every country. In the majority of people’s assessments, investing money in education and medical stands for a radical thought, and represents a country's civilization. Indeed, from a recent research depicts that a country with money supplied on schools and hospitals is likely to have a surge percentage of the economy, higher than the average proportion of the world's .
In conclusion, I assess that pouring money into the development of buildings and enhancing the infrastructure’s quality of schools as well as hospitals are equally essential. In addition, I suggest that the government ought to take action to manage the expenditure from the government’s budget and other private enterprise investments, in terms of satisfying the requirement of constructing buildings, improving schools and hospitals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: The proper name in singular (France) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ited States of America, England, France have a variety of buildings with splendid ar...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...ble job is constantly a concern for the nations authority. Additionally, the increasing...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...han the average proportion of the worlds . In conclusion, I assess that pouring...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2185.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50377833753 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42701502168 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501259445844 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2798713392 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.388888889 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274152098207 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880328907326 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607593559766 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167743115593 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399803417923 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.