In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driver'ss. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern era, There will all vehicles run in a automatic mode. The people who will travel inside the car only will be passenger not driver. As far as I am concerned that disadvantages are overlapping the advantages. I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the other hand, There will be one advantage of driverless vehicles. The people who don't know how to drive a car they can easily travel by car to using their automatic mode.
Furthermore to discuss with the disadvantages of automatic car is increasing the accident on the road. In other words, if there is no driver in the car, it will be high chances of accidents. for explicate the Mascow Times news reveled the data that automatic car will create crime as well as accidents. Hence, it can be seen that it will help to rise accidents in the community.
Shifting towards the another drawbacks due to driverless vehicles there will rise the unemployment in the society. Because If, this invention several number of driver will be jobless. In additionn, the truck driver and domestic car driver will jobless is the main disadvantages of this new creations. for instance the survey conducted by New York Times in the United States of America revealed that approximately 94% of driver will be jobless due to this invention. As a result, it will be a big reason of unemployment in the society.
By the way of conclusion, although it will increase unemployment and accidents, yet it will be beneficial for those persons who don't know how to drive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a automatic mode" with adverb for "automatic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...modern era, There will all vehicles run in a automatic mode. The people who will travel inside the ...
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Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ern era, There will all vehicles run in a automatic mode. The people who will tra...
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Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... car only will be passenger not driver. As far as I am concerned that disadvantage...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... of driverless vehicles. The people who dont know how to drive a car they can easily...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...y car to using their automatic mode. Furthermore to discuss with the disadvantages of au...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
..., it will be high chances of accidents. for explicate the Mascow Times news reveled...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'several numbers'.
Suggestion: several numbers
...the society. Because If, this invention several number of driver will be jobless. In additionn...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...in disadvantages of this new creations. for instance the survey conducted by New Yo...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ill be beneficial for those persons who dont know how to drive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, by the way, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80916030534 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83743651494 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5532783558 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.75 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437094703021 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160261090054 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102498732715 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255318393703 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101393061595 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.