Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own
In the meantime, some people argue that people who create works of art and music must seek different revenue sources, while, others think this should be taken by government. The argument on both perspectives will be examined in the forthcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, proponents of independent fund to such artists contend that private organization of art communities brings more attentive response to painters. They could connect art collector with emerging or established talents by organizing art exhibition in order to value their artworks leading to wider talent promotion. Furthermore, musicians who upload original or cover songs in social media (Youtube) may embrace opportunities to earn valuable income. To illustrate, singer gaining popularity after covering music lyrics may be offered the original song production, which expresses musicians' creativity to deliver meaningful work.
On the one hand, opponents of this view point out that some of art projects related to public interest require government support. In order to maintain city development becomes more captivated and attractive, walls in the port city of Aberdeen are covered by colourful gravities performing outdoor gallery. In addition, entertainment industry, lately, carries on tourism sector in lucrative business. Performing numerous iconic concerts, an increasing number of tourists attracted greatly contributes to national income. For instance, the significant development of Korean pop songs and drama series boost the economic growth estimated at billion dollars.
To conclude, it seems to me that the reasons why art professionals should rely on government’s financial support are to beautify the city outlook as well as to promote national tourism. This is provided that such artist enhances the community to artwork passionate.
- Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians Others believe that artists should be funded by alternative sources Discuss both views and give your own 84
- Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians Others believe that artists should be funded by alternative sources Discuss both views and give your own 84
- Employers nowadays put more emphasis on social skills Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success Do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
... boost the economic growth estimated at billion dollars. To conclude, it seems to me t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74169741697 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98801407317 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693726937269 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.372985619 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.692307692 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188800847537 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558491757151 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540294927523 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114821964178 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560613141609 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.27 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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