Making sugar
The diagram gives information about the steps involved in making sugar from sugar cane.
In general, there are seven steps in total, starting with growing sugar cane, and ending with plain sugar. It can be seen that the production of sugar is both by hand and by machines.
At the beginning of the process, farmers grow sugar cane until they are mature enough to produce sugar, at least 12-18 months. The next step is that sugar can is harvested in one of two ways. Both it is manually gathered by a small knife, and collected by means of a tractor.
After that, sugar cane is put in the crushing machine to separate fresh juice from sugar-cane dregs before being purified through limestone. Sugar juice turns ti syrup by being heated in an evaporator. Then, the syrup undergoes a process the centrifuge to separate sugar crystals. Finally, sugar is cooled and dried in some kind of vats.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...months. The next step is that sugar can is harvested in one of two ways. Both it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, at least, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71794871795 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32871478664 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6915717034 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461378894653 0.215688989381 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179702048094 0.103423049105 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109179193045 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295390739607 0.15604864568 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100694667681 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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