The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given line graph illustrates how many units of 6 differents energy were and will be used in America from a 2008 report between 1980 and estimations untils 2030
What stands out from the line graph is that while the depletion of Hydropower was remain steady, others energy witnessed a progress. Besides, the consumption of Petrol and Oil always the highest.
Starting at the highest point in 1980 with 35 quadrillion units before Petrol and Oil were saw a fluctuates and then it is predicted that will surge to nearly a half in 2030. Natural Gas ranked second in 1980 with 20 but after some rise and fall untils the period of prediction It witnessed a stability with roughly 25. The number of Coal is forecast will be troubled between 1980 and 2030, at more than 30.
Finally, all three remaining different energy in1980 were around 4 quadrillion units. The utilization of nuclear and Solar/Wind according to current predictions, will be experienced a slight growth to roughly 8 and 6 respectively in 2030. In contrast, Hydropower has minimal fluctuation before it witnessing the estimation will be stable at the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...t while the depletion of Hydropower was remain steady, others energy witnessed a progr...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
... remain steady, others energy witnessed a progress. Besides, the consumption of Petrol and...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'Oil'.
Suggestion: Always Oil
... Besides, the consumption of Petrol and Oil always the highest. Starting at the highest...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, if, second, so, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9274611399 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76778039925 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611398963731 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.610411398 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.875 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17214573657 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663599493719 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500975805655 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110505534607 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583515224037 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.