Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely argued that people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. I completely agree with this perception and this essay attempts to shed light on the rationales behind my concurrence.
On the one hand, there is no denying that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games. To begin with, reading stories from a book develop children language ability. This is because through reading books, children can accumulatie a wide range of new words as well as sentence structures. Therfore, reading books provide children more opportunities to advance vocabulary level, which help their writing skill better. By contrast, when watching TV or playing computer games, sounds and images are two keys elements rather than texts, which can take the children attention.
In addition, reading stories in books is superior to watching TV or playing computer games in term of nurturing children’s imagination. This can be explain by the fact that when they read book, they can immerse themselves in the lives of the fictional charactures that the author built and use their imagination to visualize the settings and guess the progress of the plot for the next chapter of the stories. As a result, reading book will help children create images, thoughts and opinions about the stories which can enhance their imagination. Meanwhile, this is not the case for TV and technology games, because when they play game or watch TV, the pre-configured images will take their iagination away.
In conclusion, I would contend that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children.
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- Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vance vocabulary level, which help their writing skill better. By contrast, when ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15357142857 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67821664317 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521428571429 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3815527243 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490327816852 0.244688304435 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23603888761 0.084324248473 280% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.191032840615 0.0667982634062 286% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.393163605309 0.151304729494 260% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104851808647 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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