More and more people today are visiting extreme places such as Antarctica or the Sahara desert. What are the advantages or disadvantages of such travels?
Escalating the number of tourists into high-peak areas like Antarctica and the Sahara desert. There are many pros and cons of these visitors not only to them but also to the locality like exploration of new cultures, experiencing of temperature variation and the detrimental effects of health and the heritage.
Hiking tourists to such tropical areas would make the expansion of these areas to world and open up the reality to outside. Visiting reports of these areas improves the international tourism thereby economic and cultural diversion. For instance, blogging reports of this areas tend other people to visit and feel the real nature and originality of these areas. Likewise, this would also be beneficial to the local people to expand their trade, product and revenue. Many inhabitants are selling their stuff, arrange home stays, and explaining the actual scenario of their host country and that would be an income of themselves and the nation
Conversely, there are many detrimental effects of these tourists includes cultural heritage destruction, natural disasters, physical and health problems to many. Initially, unruly expansion of tourists would imbalance the normal situation of such places. For example, over usage of fossil fuels, plastic materials and overcrowding would be a danger to the nature and the sustainability. Exploitation of earth or stability of atmosphere may lead to natural calamities to the core. Along with that two opposite climate changes would make health issues of tourists to some extent. Many of them could not be able to cope with the present situations and may have health and mental problems .
To conclude, it is an ever-trending phenomenon to visit certain places like Antarctica and Sahara desert and some of the important points mentioned above
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, likewise, may, so, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35211267606 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79525165686 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55985915493 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0830096039 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106478193011 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041286930655 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491437160087 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785055943707 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496432855325 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.