Behaviour of people depends on external factors and not due to internal factors.
Since the dawn of humanity, the behavior of humans has been regulated by certain codes of conduct and regulations set by society. In this regard, there are conflicting views, as some believe that this behavior is determined by external factors, while some stands on other side of spectrum citing that the way one behave is mainly owned by intrinsic factors. Well, I concur with the latter opinion, a person generally behaves in a way which he thinks is better. I will substantiate my viewpoint by presenting two major reasons and its corresponding examples in the following paragraphs .
Admittedly, the rules and morals set by society have profound effect on our doings. From the beginning of our life we are taught to behave in a way that is acceptable to all. For instance, wishing our elders, importance of being honest, sharing our food etc. As we grow we continue conducting these teaching in our daily life and we do so for our convenience not to gain appreciation from society. Similarly, driving on right side or waiting in a queue, all these actions are done because they offer us certain advantages. We take them granted not for the rules and morals of society but for our own benefits. Hence, final decision to obey these rules lies with us, weather we comply with convention or not. Therefore, the way we behave in society is determined by ourselves.
We as humans learn, watch or absorb things from our external environment but eventually it is us who decides what to do. We solely would be responsible for the consequences. There are laws and acts set by our societies but it depends on individual weather to abide by these rules or not. External forces might compel people to behave in a particular way but as soon as these rules are uplifted people would not behave in that particular way. Taking a situation, for example that in one particular country there is a heavy penalty on littering on roads, as a result people would be cautious about cleanliness. But on contrary if there would not be any rules regarding cleanliness, people will not adhere to keep their environment clean.
We are decision-makers and nobody can make us to do what we do not want to do. People do break laws which is evident from increasing crime rates. A thief will steal in spite of knowing that it is a crime.
In a nutshell, I would like to reaffirm my point that people themselves are responsible for their actions and not the external environment. The external factors may play a part but human action are outcomes of their personal desires and own willingness.
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- Some people believe that it is an important part of a child s education to go on field trips such as museums Others think that children should spend time learning in a classroom at school Which view do you agree with 70
- People should alway try to do something new in their lives 70
- One should never burrow money from a friend this is not good for their relationship 73
- The government should spend money on university education or on the education of young children 76
- Altruism 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76404494382 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75566284827 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512359550562 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0083118475 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1739130435 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.347826087 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30434782609 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0943186083204 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268151681686 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419081783982 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064477913974 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655860448708 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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