Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most people think that financial budget should be equally distributed for sports and social activities as well as classes and libraries. Personally, I strongly agree with this statement. There are several reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, evenly financial distribution between sports, social activities and classes, libraries create a chance for students to develop their strength at best capacity. When budget is not biased to any specific fields in academic environment, both outdoors activities' facilities and indoor ones will be maintained and improved at the same pace. Therefore, student can attend any activities they love most at their best potential. This allows students to develop strongly both physical and mental. They are able to engage in and focus any activity that they find suitable for themself. Secondly, university's staffs might feel happier if budgets equally divided for different sections. Support money which also be used to pay employees in that field, not only facilities. Hence, financial supports when be distributed evenly, staffs will be treated equally and fairly in monetary aspects. It is found that this might avoid financial dispute among staffs. Further, they might feel more confident and happier if working environment treats them unbiased.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that by supporting sports. social activities and classes, libraries equally in financial aspect, it will bring about more benefits. This results a better environment for both student development and happiness of universities 'staff.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Social
...trongly feel that by supporting sports. social activities and classes, libraries equal...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i feel, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56790123457 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74132150695 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609053497942 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7886475736 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5625 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1875 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229702311349 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739145778032 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523700234741 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177486493369 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339929729364 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.43 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Social
...trongly feel that by supporting sports. social activities and classes, libraries equal...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i feel, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56790123457 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74132150695 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609053497942 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7886475736 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5625 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1875 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229702311349 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739145778032 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523700234741 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177486493369 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339929729364 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.43 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.