More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time.
What problems does this cause?
What do you think is a possible solution?
Affording a car is becoming popular with developing country citizens these days. The principle problems this causes are pollution and traffic congestion, and the most viable solution is building a sustainable transport system.
Most individuals in developing countries claim that owning a personal car is showing how rich they are and as a result, people in these countries now face up with pollution. The transport system is not organized for big vehicles, its former was just enough for small ones. To travel by cars, the governments need to broaden the lanes by cutting down trees. Without plant absorbing ability, the air is becoming polluted days by days. Another easy - seeing problem is traffic congestion. The roads are not designed for large vehicles so it’s always getting stuck at the peak hour when everyone travelled together to workplace or get home. For example, in is advised not to go out at these time in HCM City: 8:00 AM and 5:00 P.M because everyone to work, study and come home at these time.
The most suitable solution for these problems is building a sustainable public transport. This system will encourage citizens to use public transport and the result is no more needing afford a personal vehicles. Everyone can use public transport with a low price and more effectiveness. For example, in Japan, with a high-quality metro, most citizens in this country use their public transport to travel to workplaces, go homes, hospitals, etc. As the result, pollution in this country is low and it is hard to see a big crowd stuck hard on the roads.
In conclusion, purchasing a car in developing countries for the first time is increasing high and higher and lead to pollution and traffic jams. Therefore, the best solution is building a sustainable transport.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 725, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...se time in HCM City: 8:00 AM and 5:00 P.M because everyone to work, study and com...
^
Line 3, column 767, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...because everyone to work, study and come home at these time. The most suitable s...
^^
Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'sustainable public transport'.
Suggestion: sustainable public transport
...solution for these problems is building a sustainable public transport. This system will encourage citizens to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'vehicle'?
Suggestion: vehicle
...lt is no more needing afford a personal vehicles. Everyone can use public transport with...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'sustainable transport'.
Suggestion: sustainable transport
...herefore, the best solution is building a sustainable transport.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0202020202 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76041541223 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542087542088 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2348962668 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228578228568 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741139119318 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534774347224 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159418149416 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362505722912 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 725, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...se time in HCM City: 8:00 AM and 5:00 P.M because everyone to work, study and com...
^
Line 3, column 767, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...because everyone to work, study and come home at these time. The most suitable s...
^^
Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'sustainable public transport'.
Suggestion: sustainable public transport
...solution for these problems is building a sustainable public transport. This system will encourage citizens to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'vehicle'?
Suggestion: vehicle
...lt is no more needing afford a personal vehicles. Everyone can use public transport with...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'sustainable transport'.
Suggestion: sustainable transport
...herefore, the best solution is building a sustainable transport.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0202020202 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76041541223 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542087542088 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2348962668 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228578228568 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741139119318 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534774347224 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159418149416 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362505722912 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.