Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is perceived by many that accepting a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job and lack of money whereas other debate that trying and improvement such situation is really along with my person view.
On the one hand, some people thought a bad situation is acceptable. For instance, a person thinks it is fine if he does not like his job. So he goes to work and back home on a daily basis without thinking about that he should change his job as soon as possible. This is because somebody tend to accept everything comes to their life. Indeed, there is a man or a woman suppose that lack of money is not a big problem while he or she can do better to earn money and change their lives. This leads to the fact that they live an unhappy life.
On the other hand, it is maintained that why they have to live a life which they do not feel happy. Therefore, they determine to change the situation from bad to good even though how much challenges they have to face or to deal with. For example, a worker who does not like his job because of low salary or bad working conditions should look for another job. It means he should allow life gives him more opportunities to open new door of life and to earn what he deserves for his efforts. Besides, satisfactory of jobs can help people improve their working performance which is both good for their company and employees. This leads to the fact that it helps to improve mental as well as physical health. Another point which also need to be consider is that people should have hope and dream which can bring people to new achievement
In conclusion, I tend to support the latter opinion due to the aforementioned analysis on the viewpoint.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tends'.
Suggestion: tends
...n as possible. This is because somebody tend to accept everything comes to their lif...
^^^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...uation from bad to good even though how much challenges they have to face or to deal...
^^^^
Line 5, column 833, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich can bring people to new achievement In conclusion, I tend to support the lat...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45806451613 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45813224866 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2619667952 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24670552885 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814044572952 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103649299684 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171724110669 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147533035644 0.056905535591 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tends'.
Suggestion: tends
...n as possible. This is because somebody tend to accept everything comes to their lif...
^^^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...uation from bad to good even though how much challenges they have to face or to deal...
^^^^
Line 5, column 833, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich can bring people to new achievement In conclusion, I tend to support the lat...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45806451613 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45813224866 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2619667952 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24670552885 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814044572952 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103649299684 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171724110669 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147533035644 0.056905535591 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.