It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people say that it is significant to stay with old friends than to make new ones. Despite the fact, that it is educational and fun to meet new people and sometimes it could be useful, for example, for career, I agree with that statement. To my mind you can rely on those friends, whom you know for several years and they will support you in any hard situation no matter what happens and, of cause, they will help in case you need it.
When you have a long friendship with a person, you know exactly, what you could expect from him. So if you need to share your secrets or problems, you can be sure, that your old friend will never tell about it to anybody. For example, I have a friend to whom I often share information about my personal life, which I can not tell to anybody else. Since we are friends for 20 years, thus I am sure, that she will not spread my stories everywhere, as I have a great experience of doing that previous years, that is why I can always rely on her.
Also anybody can end up in situation, when they really will need support, so only old friends will come to your place immediately and do that if you ask for it. For instance, when I was a student I broke up with boyfriend, I felt terrible and I asked to come my new friend, but she refused, saying, that she is busy. Then I called to my old friend, and, fortunately, she came to me as fast as she could, supported me and I went throw my problem easier. Then I realize, that old friends are truly meaningful in life.
No doubt, that old friends will help you. Once I moved to a new apartment and I had a lot of stuff, I did not have a car and I had no idea how to take all of it. So my friend found a car and we moved together really fast.
In conclusion, to my mind to keep old friendship is really important, you know everything about this person, his actions are predictable, you can tell whatever you want and you can get support and help when you need it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: OF_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of course' (=naturally)?
Suggestion: of course
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...that is why I can always rely on her. Also anybody can end up in situation, when t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, mind you, no doubt, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12631578947 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3111796223 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478947368421 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.234970696 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31624686881 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127418002781 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07357785695 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184263393332 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270803741764 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.97 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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