Today’s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary era, every individual is in race to make their children capable as much as they can do and mend their habbits to behave well in society, which is consequently putting them under dominance of other people. I agree with this statement upto some extent because many of the problems that make them feel pressurized are mitigated that will be explained further in this essay.
To commence with, children of current era have some menace that are forcing them to live under pressure generated by people living around them. To be precise, competetion for students in studies has increased significantaly as compared to previous times, as a result their life has became more challenging, as society expect from them to prove their presence by performing efficiently. Moreover, due to globalization some children, whose parents moved from another country gets stuck in between two different cultures, so they find it difficult to grow further.
On the contrary, while comparing to children of earlier decades, current one's has great opportunities. In addition to, schools are teaching them to be independent enough, thus they can make their own decisions regarding their future. In the present time, internet has made people aware about the mental health, and gave them will to accept children of all gender. For instance, same sex marriage has given acceptance by society that was not socially approved by earlier individuals.
To conclude, although children of today's world are facing dominance by society, yet the changes in behaviour and raised awareness in them cannot be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: become
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26070038911 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77371596961 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657587548638 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7780317453 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.2 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210182616464 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770419206961 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436805310597 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119925415111 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418353172485 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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