Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In recent years, a clear upwards trend in the adoption rates of alternative medical treatments is visible, as patients prioritize these methods more rather than visiting medical employees for assistance. In my personal opinion, while there are some benefits to this development, overall, I think this could lead to some dreadful consequences.
On one side of the spectrum, there does exist a myriad of alternatives that can provide the practitioners physical and mental welfare, for instance, traditional arts like meditation and yoga. These activities have been tried and tested, developing through their thousand years of existence, cementing their credibility. They allow the user to rest and reduce stress as it requires concentration on breathing and slow movements, disengaging the individual from the hustle and bustle of modern life. Not only do they prove to be practical, but their expenses are also relatively non-existence compared to the price tag of modern medical remedies. Combined with their abilities to reduce people's dependencies on modern healthcare, they earn the recommendation of doctors to patients with minor illnesses, so it is no wonder that their appeal to the crowd is not but a certainty.
However, it is important to note that the majority of non-conventional medical substitutions include the use of pharmaceutical products that are often unregulated and unchecked, leaving many open ambiguities, like the ingredients and possible side effects. Their effects are also slow-goers, which might make the patient lose their window of opportunity. Additionally, modern medicine has been rigorously developed over hundreds of years. Scientists can now fully understand the underlying basics of life, the function of each organ, and the causes of each disease. These have enabled the development of undeniably effective medicine like penicillin, and groundbreaking advancements in technology now provide us the ability to do laser-point accurate surgery. It is obvious that over time, they can only become ever more refined and effective, making the others lackluster.
In conclusion, while there is some truth to the benefits of some alternative treatments, the development of their usage should be considered negative, as traditional medical assistance is still a better option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...medical employees for assistance. In my personal opinion, while there are some benefits to this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18527735633 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611428571429 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4674071424 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17910975668 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539863852572 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426250847721 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973855911165 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280210827449 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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