Watching television is bad for children. Do you agree or disagree with statement. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny the fact that watching television is a good pass time for everyone be it children, adult or older people. We can learn various things from television if we manage to use it properly yet it can be detrimental too. In the given scenario, it is stated that whether television is good or bad for kids? Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly seeing children program they can develop some useful skills yet it's consequences outweigh the advantage. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the several paragraphs.
To commence with, there are numerous tv shows that are based on children such as quiz contest, dance show, drawing, sketch and so on. In addition, watching such program is really beneficial for them to gain vaulable skills and knowledge about distinct things. Drawing from my own experience, my little sister whenever she gets free, she watch her favourite cartoon in which the main character is always prompt to help other who are in need. So, this has highly influenced her in real life too. Whenever we go for a dayout and if she get in contact with someone who needs help, she urge to assist them with whatever she has either it is food or some cash. Therefore, if children manage to utilize watching useful programs as my sister do then surely this will aid them implant good habit in them.
The above stated statement sounds plausible yet there are even more repercussion opf watching television which should not be overlooked. Once, children are addicted to televsion then it will be challenging for them get rid of their habit. As a matter of fact, this lead to the increment in distance between children and study. They get distracted and could not focus on their study which eventually results in bad marks in exam. I have witnessed this in my own experience. My niece is crazy about television. As soon as she reached home from school she open the tv and begin watch her favourite show without even caring about her homework. This has really affected her study that she failed her board exam. By now, she has become little concious about her study and somehow she has retain distance with tv.
Secondly, watching tv is not good for childern health as well as continuous watching on screen can have adverse effect on their health. Furthermore, harmful radiation is emitted from screen and watching for long create difficulty to tolerate which consequently results in lowering eye sight. Drawing from my neice experience again, since she was in contact with tv screen for longer period, this has hampered her eye power. Now, without spectacle she cannot see the things clearly. Therefore, every parents should be mindful of ramifications of watching tv before granting children for it.
All things considered, despite having positive effect of tv we cannot permit children to go for it as once they get addict then it will be arduos for them to get rid of it. This will have adverse effect on their study as well as health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'watches'.
Suggestion: watches
...ttle sister whenever she gets free, she watch her favourite cartoon in which the main...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
... Whenever we go for a dayout and if she get in contact with someone who needs help,...
^^^
Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'urges'.
Suggestion: urges
...ontact with someone who needs help, she urge to assist them with whatever she has ei...
^^^^
Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'assisting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'urge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: assisting
...t with someone who needs help, she urge to assist them with whatever she has either it is...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 783, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'retained'.
Suggestion: retained
...ous about her study and somehow she has retain distance with tv. Secondly, watching...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
... which consequently results in lowering eye sight. Drawing from my neice experience again...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, i feel, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2479.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 518.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49859533294 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503861003861 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 746.1 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2591194966 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8148148148 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1851851852 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85185185185 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187348813026 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538350225204 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040031051021 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112879958341 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040335825034 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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