The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

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The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

The chart illustrates information about how many percent of weekly earning was allocated to each expenditure by families in one country in two years of 1968 and 2018.
Generally, buying food was the highest percentage of all spending in 1968 and also the highest figure in the chart while families spend their weekly income on leisure activity the most in 2018.
In detai, families allocated the highest percentage of their weekly earning to buy food with 35%. Housing expenses and clothing and footwear had the same figure with 10%, which were in second place. Figure for leisure activities was in third place with around 8%, followed by the same three figures for household goods, personal goods and transport with around 7%. The spending of fuel and power was the lowest percentage would around 6 percent.
In the next 50 years, leisure activities was the highest figure, with nearly 23%. Housing expenses was in second place with around 18%, followed by buying foods with 17% approximately. The lowest figures belong to personal goods and fuel and power with around 4%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01675977654 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39989492399 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508379888268 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5959399728 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7777777778 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182208805292 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837246348341 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136800369149 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167578857302 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161953515628 0.0819641961636 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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